Category: Communication

Dear Mr Baca

My name is Isaiah  and I go to The London nautical school and live in England,London west Norwood also like to play football.My teacher Mr O’Brien  told us about you and likes your peons. By this I started to read your poems.

I am writing to you to tell you I like the way you write  poems and how inspired I am to read,as I get older I will like to read more older and adult hood book to see what you what through  and how you did It.

I got a lot of question  to ask but first I want to know who inspired you to get into poems writing ,who gave you the will to do. Also who was there when you need it. Did you also inspired anyone else. How did you put your head down and focus.

Another thing I would want to know is about prison life when you was in prison how did you get in peons,How did you feel did. Did you ever  express your self, how did u find out about poems.

Early life

Before you got into prison, did you ever look for your family I hope you don’t mind me asking did you ever look for one meme beer of family . As you was in orphanage did you ever make friend there? ,why did you leave you and how did you feel. Again if you don’t mind me asking but how did you get into drug dealing?as you was doing this did you want to do this or just want to be an normal boy? What was going through your head as did was happening.Also one last question is how did you get in to drug dealing?

the poem that really interesting was immigrants in in our own land  by you that really catch me was the first line it really said something what did you mean when you said?that first line inspired because it just show if u work hard you can make it in the coming years.

later life

when you left prison how did you get in poemt writing? also did you ever go back to drug dealing? i hope you don’t mind asking but did ever go and look for your family? and are you friends with anyone you was prison in. again i hope you don’t mind me asking again but did you ever go back to selling drugs again? who made you into who you are now?

Now life

When you write poem what do you think of? do you think of you childhood or prison life? the poem you write make me want to read more

Was your poems  made for adults or kid or both?. as you had a crime record has it be hard to get a job you must have work extra hard to get to where you how committed was yo and why? As you was growing up did you  feel like an outsider ?how much practice did it take to be a poemt.

sincerely,

Isaiah Coker year 8

 

 

How does Sherman Alexis presents junior as an outsider

In[ the true diary of a part time Indian] one way is which junior is presented as an outsider is through dual experience of living in wellpinit  whilst studying in reardan.for example in wellpinit people think he want to be white when he want to get a better education, but his friends thought he was be traded them.In Reardan however junior is also an outsider because he the only Indian who went to the school.

One way junior  is an outsider is because of his look and his appearance in the book it shows he an outsider as he says ‘MY FEET WERE A SIZE A ELEVN IN THIRDE GRADE WITH MY PENCIL BODY LOOKING LIKE A L’]This  show he an outsider because no was a size eleven foot at third grade and a pencil body that look like a l this show he an outsider.

Also junior describe his face as an outsider by him saying [TEN MORE THAN USUAL ,TEN MORE THAN NORMAL,TEN THEETH PAST HUMAN ]he also says [MY THEETH GOT SO CROWED THAT I COULD BARELY CLOSE MY MOUNTH. This show junior is presenting his self as an outsider by him describing his self as boy who cant close his mouth.

Another way junior  is an outsider is by portray. In the book junior has presents his self a tall boy and also poor. In the book junior has to walk all the way to readran to wellpinit. One inserting fact about junior is at the café with his friends he couldn’t pay for his self by him saying’ I WOULD BE ABALE TO PAY FOR ANTHING’ this show he an outsider by him hoping his friends are going to pay for him and they do, also when his family goes to coniso  to earl money for there family.

Junior is an outsider is in the basketball game and as junior present his self as a outsider by him saying ‘Arnold sucks’ this suggest that his old school are trying to make his feel like his no one because his left the school and trying to get junior loss confused and not focus on the game and only that

He an outsider as well in his new his an outsider by him being the only black person there and him acting in a different way as the white people there by him saying he feel’ Indian in one palace and white in the other place’this show that feel white in the school and not like his black anyone  this is also suggest that he start to feel in love with white people as he say being ‘white is like being a job’ as well.

In I think this is one of the best outsider book ever I think that it spoken to the reader and make the reader laugh. This book can help a lot of people in life and how the writer feel but just put it in his own word .I think that the book was to so how the writer was when he was younger and what he was doing and went through

 

 

 

 

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